literature

Take a walk

Deviation Actions

LazyLionus's avatar
By
Published:
367 Views

Literature Text

Screw the talk
       Take a walk

        A sweet escape
To the real reality
  Then you will see
      What life can be
A short poem written on request of :iconrealityglitch:

Quite literal, but I think it could give most people in our modern society something.
© 2011 - 2024 LazyLionus
Comments25
Join the community to add your comment. Already a deviant? Log In
Flames-on-a-Page's avatar
I know it's a bit late, but hey, this is actually really good. As in the ideas it gives are great. It's simplistic too. The only critique I have of it is that it might be too simple,but as you said yourself, it is quite literal.